Dear Sir，

　　I'm glad to recommend （推薦） to you my friend Li Ming.

　　Li Ming was born on July 15， in 1974 in Beijing.         1. _______

　　He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.            2. _______

　　When he was in the middle school， he did good in maths， 3. _______

　　physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating   4. _______

　　from No.4 High School， he entered into Beijing           5. _______

　　University study physics. After four years of hard        6. _______

　　work there， he went to the United States for farther     7. _______

　　study. Because of his excellent work， he get a doctor's  8. _______

　　degree in physics this year.He is now in good health

　　but would like to make contributions to our               9. _______

　　country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply.              10. ______

　　Yours truly，Wang Li

　　答案及解析

　　1. 刪去1974前的in.時(shí)間狀語是年、月、日的只需用一個(gè)介詞；但若是年、月、日、時(shí)的，則要用at six thirty， on the morning of May 4th，2001.

　　2. 此行無錯(cuò)。

　　3. good改為well.固定詞組be good at，do well in意為"在……學(xué)得很好".

　　4. fond前加was.動(dòng)詞謂語殘缺錯(cuò)誤。fond是形容詞，and引導(dǎo)并列謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，故用詞組was fond of.

　　5. 刪去into.動(dòng)詞enter是及物動(dòng)詞，直接接賓語。

　　6. study前加to.此處用不定式短語作目的狀語。

　　7. farther改為further.farther意為"更遠(yuǎn)的"，表示實(shí)際距離；further意為"深遠(yuǎn)的，進(jìn)一步的"，指抽象概念， 這里為"深造學(xué)習(xí)"，應(yīng)用further study.

　　8. get改為got.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

　　9. but改為and.根據(jù)上下文邏輯，前后兩分句為并列遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

　　10. receive改為receiving.look forward to中的to為介詞，后面應(yīng)接名詞或動(dòng)名詞。